RESOLVED FIXED 205041
IsLoggedIn: Abstract data type for IsLoggedIn state
https://bugs.webkit.org/show_bug.cgi?id=205041
Summary IsLoggedIn: Abstract data type for IsLoggedIn state
John Wilander
Reported 2019-12-09 17:24:16 PST
We need data representation for IsLoggedIn state.
Attachments
Patch (28.77 KB, patch)
2019-12-09 17:28 PST, John Wilander
no flags
Patch (26.32 KB, patch)
2019-12-10 17:49 PST, John Wilander
no flags
Patch (26.28 KB, patch)
2019-12-10 17:53 PST, John Wilander
no flags
Patch (28.64 KB, patch)
2019-12-11 17:50 PST, John Wilander
no flags
Patch for landing (28.66 KB, patch)
2019-12-13 10:59 PST, John Wilander
no flags
John Wilander
Comment 1 2019-12-09 17:24:33 PST
John Wilander
Comment 2 2019-12-09 17:28:11 PST
John Wilander
Comment 3 2019-12-10 10:18:34 PST
The ios-wk2 bot failure is an unrelated text diff thing.
Chris Dumez
Comment 4 2019-12-10 13:11:18 PST
Comment on attachment 385217 [details] Patch View in context: https://bugs.webkit.org/attachment.cgi?id=385217&action=review > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:33 > + initialize(domain, username, tokenType, authType, m_authType == IsLoggedInAuthenticationType::Unmanaged ? LoggedInExpiryShort : LoggedInExpiryLong); Using m_authType here is wrong. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:41 > +void IsLoggedIn::initialize(const RegistrableDomain& domain, const String& username, IsLoggedInCredentialTokenType tokenType, IsLoggedInAuthenticationType authType, const Seconds& expiry) Why don't we have one constructor call the other instead of having an initialize() method? > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:53 > + for (unsigned i = 0; i < length; ++i) { Seems like this could use String::find(CodeUnitMatchFunction) > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:71 > +void IsLoggedIn::setExpiry(const Seconds& expiry) no need for const &. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:76 > + if (m_authType == IsLoggedInAuthenticationType::Unmanaged) m_expiryTime = m_loggedInTime + std::min(expiry, m_authType == IsLoggedInAuthenticationType::Unmanaged ? LoggedInExpiryShort : LoggedInExpiryLong); > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:35 > +enum IsLoggedInCredentialTokenType : bool { LegacyCookie, HttpStateToken }; enum class Http -> HTTP > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:36 > +enum IsLoggedInAuthenticationType : uint8_t { WebAuthn, PasswordManager, Unmanaged }; enum class > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:40 > + We should probably drop this blank line. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:51 > + WEBCORE_EXPORT void setExpiry(const Seconds&); It is confusing that expiry() returns a expiration date/time as a MonotonicTime, but setExpiry() sets a lifetime in seconds. Maybe this should be called setLifetime()? ? > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:54 > + RegistrableDomain registrableDomain() const { return m_domain; } const RegistrableDomain& > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:55 > + String username() const { return m_username; } const String&
John Wilander
Comment 5 2019-12-10 14:18:59 PST
(In reply to Chris Dumez from comment #4) > Comment on attachment 385217 [details] > Patch > > View in context: > https://bugs.webkit.org/attachment.cgi?id=385217&action=review > > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:33 > > + initialize(domain, username, tokenType, authType, m_authType == IsLoggedInAuthenticationType::Unmanaged ? LoggedInExpiryShort : LoggedInExpiryLong); > > Using m_authType here is wrong. You're right! Good catch. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:41 > > +void IsLoggedIn::initialize(const RegistrableDomain& domain, const String& username, IsLoggedInCredentialTokenType tokenType, IsLoggedInAuthenticationType authType, const Seconds& expiry) > > Why don't we have one constructor call the other instead of having an > initialize() method? You mean delegating constructors. I thought of that but remember seeing other places where we seemed to prefer an initialize() function. But I'll try the delegating approach. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:53 > > + for (unsigned i = 0; i < length; ++i) { > > Seems like this could use String::find(CodeUnitMatchFunction) Have not used that before. Will have a look. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:71 > > +void IsLoggedIn::setExpiry(const Seconds& expiry) > > no need for const &. Ah. There are a few instances of it in WebKit but not too many. Will fix. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:76 > > + if (m_authType == IsLoggedInAuthenticationType::Unmanaged) > > m_expiryTime = m_loggedInTime + std::min(expiry, m_authType == > IsLoggedInAuthenticationType::Unmanaged ? LoggedInExpiryShort : > LoggedInExpiryLong); Good suggestion. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:35 > > +enum IsLoggedInCredentialTokenType : bool { LegacyCookie, HttpStateToken }; > > enum class Will fix. > Http -> HTTP Will fix. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:36 > > +enum IsLoggedInAuthenticationType : uint8_t { WebAuthn, PasswordManager, Unmanaged }; > > enum class Will fix. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:40 > > + > > We should probably drop this blank line. Will fix. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:51 > > + WEBCORE_EXPORT void setExpiry(const Seconds&); > > It is confusing that expiry() returns a expiration date/time as a > MonotonicTime, but setExpiry() sets a lifetime in seconds. Maybe this should > be called setLifetime()? > ? Hmm. I'll think about it and get them aligned. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:54 > > + RegistrableDomain registrableDomain() const { return m_domain; } > > const RegistrableDomain& Will fix. > > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:55 > > + String username() const { return m_username; } > > const String& Will fix. Thanks, Chris! Excellent feedback.
John Wilander
Comment 6 2019-12-10 17:49:40 PST
John Wilander
Comment 7 2019-12-10 17:53:37 PST
John Wilander
Comment 8 2019-12-10 17:54:06 PST
Forgot to update the change log with the fixed function name.
John Wilander
Comment 9 2019-12-11 11:29:07 PST
The api-ios test failure for TestWebKitAPI.WebKit.MediaCache is unrelated.
Chris Dumez
Comment 10 2019-12-11 13:56:36 PST
Comment on attachment 385329 [details] Patch View in context: https://bugs.webkit.org/attachment.cgi?id=385329&action=review > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.cpp:48 > + auto spaceOrNewline = username.find([](UChar ch) { Wouldn't this work? auto spaceOrNewline = username.find(isSpaceOrNewline); > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:35 > +enum class IsLoggedInCredentialTokenType : bool { LegacyCookie, HTTPStateToken }; Given that you have IsLoggedIn in the name of your enum, you might as well move it inside the class scope and drop the IsLoggedIn prefix. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:36 > +enum class IsLoggedInAuthenticationType : uint8_t { WebAuthn, PasswordManager, Unmanaged }; Ditto. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:38 > +class IsLoggedIn { As discussed offline, IsLoggedIn is an off name for a class IMHO. I'd prefer something like LoggedInStatus > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:63 > + IsLoggedInCredentialTokenType m_tokenType; Your class has a default constructor but this does not have a default value. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:64 > + IsLoggedInAuthenticationType m_authType; ditto. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:66 > + MonotonicTime m_expiryTime; Note that if you are going to persist these to disk, then I do not think that using MonotonicTime is safe. IIRC, MonotonicTime gets reset on device restart. > Source/WebCore/page/IsLoggedIn.h:73 > +template<> struct EnumTraits<WebCore::IsLoggedInAuthenticationType> { Can you please check with Alex to see if we really still need EnumTraits?
John Wilander
Comment 11 2019-12-11 17:50:32 PST
John Wilander
Comment 12 2019-12-11 17:53:18 PST
The style checker complained when I indented the initializer list for the constructor: ERROR: Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.cpp:63: Code inside a namespace should not be indented. [whitespace/indent] [4] That's why it's not indented. Looks ugly.
John Wilander
Comment 13 2019-12-11 18:36:07 PST
We still need EnumTraits according to Alex and I wasn’t able to use username.find(isSpaceOrNewline).
Chris Dumez
Comment 14 2019-12-12 14:54:37 PST
Comment on attachment 385467 [details] Patch View in context: https://bugs.webkit.org/attachment.cgi?id=385467&action=review > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.cpp:62 > +: m_domain { domain } Indentation problem. > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.h:39 > +class LoggedInStatus : public RefCounted<LoggedInStatus> { Without seeing how this will be used, it is hard for me to comment on whether or not this should subclass RefCounted. > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.h:62 > + using RefCounted::ref; Why is this needed? > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.h:63 > + using RefCounted::deref; Ditto.
John Wilander
Comment 15 2019-12-13 10:59:56 PST
Created attachment 385617 [details] Patch for landing
WebKit Commit Bot
Comment 16 2019-12-13 11:18:45 PST
Comment on attachment 385617 [details] Patch for landing Clearing flags on attachment: 385617 Committed r253489: <https://trac.webkit.org/changeset/253489>
WebKit Commit Bot
Comment 17 2019-12-13 11:18:47 PST
All reviewed patches have been landed. Closing bug.
John Wilander
Comment 18 2019-12-13 12:37:57 PST
(In reply to Chris Dumez from comment #14) > Comment on attachment 385467 [details] > Patch > > View in context: > https://bugs.webkit.org/attachment.cgi?id=385467&action=review > > > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.cpp:62 > > +: m_domain { domain } > > Indentation problem. Yeah, it was the style checker complaining. I fixed it though. > > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.h:39 > > +class LoggedInStatus : public RefCounted<LoggedInStatus> { > > Without seeing how this will be used, it is hard for me to comment on > whether or not this should subclass RefCounted. As discussed offline, I switched to a unique ref. > > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.h:62 > > + using RefCounted::ref; > > Why is this needed? No longer. It was some build issue I addressed with it but that might have been when I was figuring out the ISO heap allocation. Might have been a red herring. > > Source/WebCore/page/LoggedInStatus.h:63 > > + using RefCounted::deref; > > Ditto. No longer. Thanks, Chris!
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